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Pinkie walked through Sugar Cube Corner. It was early yet, the shop hadn't opened. She watched the light from the rising sun play across the colourful candies and sweets, making them sparkle like diamonds. She straightened a display of lollipops until it looked perfect and she smiled at the beauty of it.

She walked out the shop door and locked it behind her, even though she knew it would never open again. They only had a few minutes left.

Putting on her best smile she bounced over down the street and towards a table where her friends were gathered round.

"There you are Pinkie," Twilight called to her happily. She didn't know, none of them did. Twilight spoke briefly about the the great adventure they had the night before. Pinkie found it hard to listen to the recap, but savored hearing her friend's voice.

"I just want you all to know, that you're my very best friends and I'm just so happy to be with you," Twilight finished and gathered them all into a group hug. It was a bit out of character, but Pinkie didn't mind.

She had to speak now, she got the last line. She swallowed hard and her throat felt dry. "And we'll be together forever."

Later, on forums across the web, posters complained of another show "screwed by the network" and the continuing downward trend of cartoons.  Still there were others discussing an image cropped from the last shot.  All the ponies were smiling and laughing in the picture, but Pinkie alone had tears streaming down her face.
A VERY short thing I did on 4chan as part of a hey-let's-try-to-make-each-other-cry thread.
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AwesomeSauce432 Featured By Owner Sep 23, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh my god. I can honestly imagine the people working on the show, finding out they're being cancelled, and being like: Alright. We're going to screw the network over one last time. 

And insert that scene right at the end. We will figure it out. Maybe they'll have that last episode be about something sad, so the network won't make the connection. But we will. 
oh my god that's depressing. 
ProffessorSodaMan Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
This is depressing...
zekromic Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2013
The show won't last forever, but you'll be my best friends forever. I don't give a shit if you're fictional, you'll be my friends, you saved me from a depression streak, and I'll be forever in debt. 
alexwarlorn Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2013
You guys still exist in our imagination. 
Serefin99 Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2013
This manages to put a depressing spin on Pinkie's Fourth Wall breakage. I mean, could you imagine knowing that your entire world is about to end, and you could do nothing about it? And that you're the only one that knows anything about the end and no one would believe you?
ShiroKusakabe Featured By Owner May 17, 2013
this damn thing lasts less than 300 words... HOW THE HELL DID IT MADE ME SHED LIUQID PRIDE!
alexwarlorn Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2013
My one hope is that I finish my fanfic before this fanfic comes to pass.
CrimsonRisk Featured By Owner May 13, 2013
You have one more season. Better get crackin'.
alexwarlorn Featured By Owner Apr 11, 2014
I was told that they had hired it on for more reasons past 4. 
NicLove Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
"(... Pinkie alone had tears streaming down her face.)" What?
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