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2nd part of my OPPP fic.
Fun fact, this took me 5 months to make! I took the story as a request and then had NO IDEA what to do with it.
Turns out drunken rambling was the answer all along!
May do a part 3 for Romana since folks didn't seem to get what was going on with her during this.
Fun fact, this took me 5 months to make! I took the story as a request and then had NO IDEA what to do with it.
Turns out drunken rambling was the answer all along!
May do a part 3 for Romana since folks didn't seem to get what was going on with her during this.
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As has been said earlier, if you take out the detail that they are ponies, you still have a great story here. This is a point that I am rather split on, though.
On one hand that means it is universal, and it was done so well that everyone can relate to it on some level. It is a 'true' story that goes beyond the form of the characters. On the other hand it also means that you did not capitalize to the fullest on the fact that they were what they were, and some may say that this was a wasted opportunity to use pony at maximum level efficiency. *insert bad pun here*
However, since these are background characters shown for a combined time of about five seconds in the whole series, and possessing personalities that were almost completely generated by the fans, I would say you did a pretty good job.
And besides, OPPP is an earth pony. They got the crap end of the stick really, as far as powers go, so you worked with what you were given. Considering how "abilities" of the earth ponies are supposed to be increased strength and endurance, I would say that the fact she didn't drop over dead from alcohol poisoning means that you showcased her "powers" rather well.
Also, I'm glad you gave Romana a hidden almost-tragedy. We should always give pause to consider how strong the seemingly unbreakable people around us actually are.
On one hand that means it is universal, and it was done so well that everyone can relate to it on some level. It is a 'true' story that goes beyond the form of the characters. On the other hand it also means that you did not capitalize to the fullest on the fact that they were what they were, and some may say that this was a wasted opportunity to use pony at maximum level efficiency. *insert bad pun here*
However, since these are background characters shown for a combined time of about five seconds in the whole series, and possessing personalities that were almost completely generated by the fans, I would say you did a pretty good job.
And besides, OPPP is an earth pony. They got the crap end of the stick really, as far as powers go, so you worked with what you were given. Considering how "abilities" of the earth ponies are supposed to be increased strength and endurance, I would say that the fact she didn't drop over dead from alcohol poisoning means that you showcased her "powers" rather well.
Also, I'm glad you gave Romana a hidden almost-tragedy. We should always give pause to consider how strong the seemingly unbreakable people around us actually are.